Tuesday, July 23, 2024

Getting real about ELAR TEKS: Commentary and Instructional Implications for Assessment

Some TEKS insights on a project...

I'm working on TEKS commentary for a lesson in a series on online assessment success: Page to Pixel.  I'm working on how we teach kids to have a more mature approach to consuming cold texts. In the lesson, we begin with a scan of the text and then apply knowledge of genre characteristics to set purposes for reading and annotation.

As I was working through some of these ideas, it reminded me of some things ELAR folks need to fight against and for about how our content works. 

1. After a while, people stop looking at the foundational language skills TEKS. Mistake. There's still a lot of work to do with reading words and spelling them with derivational constancy (meaning and origin.) Efforts with vocabulary and fluency never end. 
2. People are told to put objectives on the board. Like which one? Are you kidding me? At a certain point, single TEK teaching just isn't what ELAR is about. We USE ALL of that stuff to make meaning. If you are only teaching about informational text and a thesis, you've moved into identification and not analysis. It's like eating flour when you really want tres leches. 
3. People talk all the time about teaching titles. We aren't teaching BOOKS. We are teaching people to be critical consumers of text. It doesn't matter what text you use as long as you address the thinking and HOW behind making meaning of it.
4. Background knowledge matters. We do all kinds of gymnastics around preparing kids to read texts. But that's not what thinkers have to do ever or anywhere. People read cold. No prep. No background info. No powerpoint about history and context. We have to teach folks what do do when they know nothing about the text or topic. 
5. Reading is inquiry and research. You can't read a dad gum thing without applying some form of critical inquiry. At least we shouldn't. 

Here's the commentary behind the insights above: 

TEKS Commentary 

 Developing and Sustaining Foundational Language Skills: Listening, speaking, reading, writing, and thinking--fluency. Students use genre characteristics to prepare for fluent reading before they begin. During reading, the genre characteristics help readers consume key ideas fluently. After reading, fluency is needed to re-enter the text and reconsider evidence for analysis and response. 

 Developing and Sustaining Foundational Language Skills: Listening, speaking, reading, writing, and thinking--independent reading. 

These charts and organizers are not worksheets to be filled out. We really don’t care what goes in them either. The point is that students know how to use the genre characteristics to guide comprehension before, during, and after reading. We want them to use these ideas and concepts about text fluently and independently. 

 Comprehension Skills: listening, speaking, reading, writing, and thinking. The students use metacognitive skills to both develop and deepen comprehension of increasingly complex text. A-I.

 All comprehension skills apply to the concepts in the activities described. The culmination of these skills in practice and at the moment of reading acts is a synthesis of reading proficiency we want as outcomes. 

 Response Skills: listening, speaking, reading, writing, and thinking using multiple texts. The student responds to an increasingly challenging variety of sources that are read, heard, or viewed. 

While the activities and processes described here apply to all of the TEKS in this strand, E is most strongly correlated to the lessons: interact with sources in meaningful ways, such as notetaking, annotating, freewriting, or illustrating. 


 Multiple Genres: listening, speaking, reading, writing, and thinking using multiple texts--genres. The students recognizes and analyzes genre specific characteristics, structures, and purposes within and across increasingly complex traditional, contemporary, classical and diverse texts. 

Again, all the standards apply to this lesson. The reader uses the content of these TEKS to make decisions about the analysis approach needed for the tasks. And, as multiple genres are connected to this process, the writer selects the organizational structure of the genre to select the text evidence and compose the response required by the genre listed in the prompts. It’s critical that in teaching these standards, we are sharing how the genre characteristics shape our comprehension and compositional response. 

 An unpopular opinion here. STAAR will not address the cannon or full texts and novels. It’s not that we shouldn’t read these things. It’s just not possible to recreate that kind of reading in assessment. The language is too dense and concepts too involved to even use an excerpt. To Kill a Mockingbird is valid reading for ELAR. So are many of the other classic texts “taught” in our classes. Teaching core texts, however, will not prepare students for thinking and discernment tasks on standardized assessments that use cold reads of text. Teaching MUST address how we make meaning of cold reads using the genre characteristics to comprehend and respond. 

 Author’s Purpose and Craft: listening, speaking, reading, writing, and thinking using multiple texts. The student uses critical inquiry to analyze the author's choices and how they influence and communicate meaning within a variety of texts. The student analyzes and applies author’s craft purposefully in their own products and performances. A-F. 


All the student expectations apply here as well - because the student is pulling from information about this TEK content to make decisions about the text to be read and the use of one to be composed. 

 Composition - the process and genres. 

ALL are used in this lesson. Learners are fluent in the writing process and characteristics of the genre they intend to compose. Writers select meaningful components of the genre to embed useful components of the source text as support within the genre characteristics required by the prompt. 

 Inquiry and Research: listening, speaking, reading, writing, and thinking using multiple texts. The student engages in both short term and sustained recursive inquiry processes for a variety of purposes. 


Again - all of the standards apply to this lesson. Most folks don’t really think about research…delegating it to end of the year events when the library is closed and no one has technology. But really, the approach to texts on assessment is recursive inquiry. Readers are adding to their body of knowledge by interrogating the source text. And they respond by answering questions as they recursively move between the text and the question options. Or they respond by mining the text for evidence that can support a claim or thesis. Folks - we are teaching an inquiry research process with our approach and response to every text. 

Can we?

What if we upended our scope and sequence and theory of action about what we are actually teaching? Not TKM. Not Lord of the Flies. What if we taught our learners that what we really do in English class is figure out and know stuff so we can do things. 

Tuesday, July 16, 2024

Using the Truism Braid with Nonfiction ECR Responses

Using the Truism Braid with Nonfiction ECR Responses

Dr. Shona Rose; July 16, 2024


Truism Braids with Gretchen and Kayla

Considerations for Composing

Truism Braid with Nonfiction: 3-5 2022 STAAR Sample Scoring Guide Argumentative Response

Truism Braid: 2023 STAAR 3rd Grade Argumentative Response

Truism Braid: 2024 7th Grade Argumentative Response (Not available as of July 16, 2024)

Truism Braid: 2023 STAAR Grade 4 Informational Response

Truism Braids with Gretchen and Kayla

Truism Braid Lesson from Text Structures from Picture Books


I went to Kernel Camp last week. Gretchen and Kayla explained how to apply the truism braid in the video linked above. They are funny, interesting, and SO on point about how and why we respond to texts. As readers and writers, we use text to reveal truths about life and to make decisions that make our lives better. 


The process itself is insightful…and delightfully simple. Even for the littles. 


But how would we use this process with nonfiction? With information and argumentative response? I’ve played around with the concept to create what truism braids might look like in the ECR world.


Considerations for Composing

So…I love the QA12345 method and the Truism Braid. Here’s some things I noticed while transferring the method to our released prompts: 


  • We really are wanting to see if folks understand what they read - that’s the truism for comprehension. 

  • And we want to see if they understand how writers craft meaningful text - that’s the truism for Author’s Craft, Composition. 

  • The structure gives us a scaffold for organizational structure (informational/argumentative) to hold the content (text evidence)  and communication of ideas (thesis/claim). 

  • Text evidence isn’t just in one place in the org structure. This is why RACE is limiting. Text evidence is in the commentary and explanation as well. Paraphrase/summary/synthesis, references, context and connections to the ideas. Extensions. The thinking and reasoning. 

  • By listing the truths/truisms, we are answering questions like: Who cares? Why does that matter? Essentially, these are the inferences, generalizations…the topic sentences and ahas BEHIND what we have read. The truism is the whole human point of reading. 

  • Teaching this is a matter of layering. Comprehension first. Text evidence next. Then organizational structure, using the counter as the first body paragraph. Then adding in the transitions from Weinsten’s placemat. Then the editing. 

  • And then there’s the whole matter of teaching what this looks like digitally. 


Truism Braid with Nonfiction: 3-5 2022 STAAR Sample Scoring Guide Argumentative Response

Q/Prompt: Explain whether you think the steamboat or clipper ship changes life in the US more. 


A/Introduction: Working Thesis: When considering change to life in the US, the steamboat had more impact than the clipper ship. 



Text Evidence: (context and details) A ship named the Clermont was a new invention. It could go “against the flow of the river” and made the trip “in a day and a half” that “normally took a day and a half.”



Commentary: This invention allowed faster travel in “shallow water” in areas that usually couldn’t hold a ship. This was because the boats had “flat bottoms.” Now, the ships could bring supplies “quicker and more cheaply than other boats.” 



Truism: People love a bargain and love getting it fast more than anything. Cheaper goods made life better for the people in the towns. 



Text Evidence: (reference of multiple cause and effect relationships) The steamships traveled the Mississippi and Ohio Rivers allowed travel “deeper into the interior of the country. As a result, trade along the rivers flourished.” 



Commentary: Since people could get supplies into remote areas, they began to move and settle across the country. 



Truism: People enjoy comfort. Having goods made it easier to move and live out West. 


Conclusion: The steamships provided bargains and comfort. People could have cheaper goods more quickly. This access led to settling the interior and western parts of the nation. 


Using Counterargument: 

Q:Explain whether you think the steamboat or clipper ship changed life in the US more. 


A/Introduction: While both ships “would bring changes to the United States,” the steamship changed life in the United States more than the Clipper Ships. 

COUNTER: 

Text Evidence: (paraphrase of main ideas)The section on clipper ships focuses on the design of the ships that allowed competition in the tea races and access to the west coast to participate in The Gold Rush. 



Commentary: While both types of ships caused changes, the focus and impact of clipper ships impacted a few businessmen in the tea trade and those “seeking their fortunes” in San Francisco. 


Truism: The rich are few, especially those prospecting for gold. 



Text Evidence: In contrast, the text references about steamships tells us that the impact “drew more people west, extending where the US population lived.” 



Commentary: The steamships opened up trade, causing towns to grow in more places in the US. Many people worked and lived in new places in the United States. 



Truism: Trade leads to population growth and the development of towns. 


Conclusion: The clipper ships impacted fewer folks, but the steamship opened up areas where  many people could work and live beyond the Mississippi River.


Truism Braid: 2023 STAAR 3rd Grade Argumentative Response

Q/Prompt: Explain your opinion about why people should or should not be rewarded for recycling. 


Answer: Working Thesis: People should be rewarded for recycling. 


Text Evidence: People in states that use rewards “tend to recycle more than those in other states.” 




Commentary: The data is clear: when people get rewards, they recycle more. More rewards causes more recycling. 


Truism: Rewards are a positive reason to act. 



Text Evidence: The text explains that people “should recycle because it is the right thing to do. “But the truth is, that does not always happen.” 



Commentary: Sure, people should recycle. But they don’t. A reward like exchanging for food or a lower trash bill could entice people to do the right thing. 



Truism: People don’t always do what is right. 



Conclusion: Rewards for recycling shows promise in increasing participation in recycling because people don’t always do what is right and data shows that cities who use rewards have more folks participating in recycling. 


Truism Braid: 2024 7th Grade Argumentative Response (Not available as of July 16, 2024)

Q/Prompt: Should students be involved in deciding how money is spent in schools or communities through participatory budgeting? Why or why not? 


Truism Braid: 2023 STAAR Grade 4 Informational Response


Q/Prompt: Explain why the Edwards Aquifer is important in the article. 

Answer: Working Thesis: The Edwards Aquifer is important. 



Text Evidence: The text explains that the aquifer is a “source of drinking water for over two million people.”



Commentary: People need safe water to drink. And two million people is a lot of people. 


Truism: Clean water is critical for human consumption. 



Text Evidence: The text also explains that the aquifer “provides water for agriculture.” 



Commentary: The water in the aquifer is also used to water plants and crops. 


Truism: Society and culture thrive on quality sources of water to grow food


Conclusion: The Edwards Aquifer is important because it provides water for drinking and for growing food.