Tuesday, July 23, 2024
Getting real about ELAR TEKS: Commentary and Instructional Implications for Assessment
Tuesday, July 16, 2024
Using the Truism Braid with Nonfiction ECR Responses
Using the Truism Braid with Nonfiction ECR Responses
Dr. Shona Rose; July 16, 2024
Truism Braids with Gretchen and Kayla
Truism Braid with Nonfiction: 3-5 2022 STAAR Sample Scoring Guide Argumentative Response
Truism Braid: 2023 STAAR 3rd Grade Argumentative Response
Truism Braid: 2024 7th Grade Argumentative Response (Not available as of July 16, 2024)
Truism Braid: 2023 STAAR Grade 4 Informational Response
Truism Braids with Gretchen and Kayla
Truism Braid Lesson from Text Structures from Picture Books
I went to Kernel Camp last week. Gretchen and Kayla explained how to apply the truism braid in the video linked above. They are funny, interesting, and SO on point about how and why we respond to texts. As readers and writers, we use text to reveal truths about life and to make decisions that make our lives better.
The process itself is insightful…and delightfully simple. Even for the littles.
But how would we use this process with nonfiction? With information and argumentative response? I’ve played around with the concept to create what truism braids might look like in the ECR world.
Considerations for Composing
So…I love the QA12345 method and the Truism Braid. Here’s some things I noticed while transferring the method to our released prompts:
We really are wanting to see if folks understand what they read - that’s the truism for comprehension.
And we want to see if they understand how writers craft meaningful text - that’s the truism for Author’s Craft, Composition.
The structure gives us a scaffold for organizational structure (informational/argumentative) to hold the content (text evidence) and communication of ideas (thesis/claim).
Text evidence isn’t just in one place in the org structure. This is why RACE is limiting. Text evidence is in the commentary and explanation as well. Paraphrase/summary/synthesis, references, context and connections to the ideas. Extensions. The thinking and reasoning.
By listing the truths/truisms, we are answering questions like: Who cares? Why does that matter? Essentially, these are the inferences, generalizations…the topic sentences and ahas BEHIND what we have read. The truism is the whole human point of reading.
Teaching this is a matter of layering. Comprehension first. Text evidence next. Then organizational structure, using the counter as the first body paragraph. Then adding in the transitions from Weinsten’s placemat. Then the editing.
And then there’s the whole matter of teaching what this looks like digitally.
Truism Braid with Nonfiction: 3-5 2022 STAAR Sample Scoring Guide Argumentative Response
Q/Prompt: Explain whether you think the steamboat or clipper ship changes life in the US more.
A/Introduction: Working Thesis: When considering change to life in the US, the steamboat had more impact than the clipper ship.
Text Evidence: (context and details) A ship named the Clermont was a new invention. It could go “against the flow of the river” and made the trip “in a day and a half” that “normally took a day and a half.” |
Commentary: This invention allowed faster travel in “shallow water” in areas that usually couldn’t hold a ship. This was because the boats had “flat bottoms.” Now, the ships could bring supplies “quicker and more cheaply than other boats.” |
Truism: People love a bargain and love getting it fast more than anything. Cheaper goods made life better for the people in the towns. |
Text Evidence: (reference of multiple cause and effect relationships) The steamships traveled the Mississippi and Ohio Rivers allowed travel “deeper into the interior of the country. As a result, trade along the rivers flourished.” |
Commentary: Since people could get supplies into remote areas, they began to move and settle across the country. |
Truism: People enjoy comfort. Having goods made it easier to move and live out West. |
Conclusion: The steamships provided bargains and comfort. People could have cheaper goods more quickly. This access led to settling the interior and western parts of the nation.
Using Counterargument:
Q:Explain whether you think the steamboat or clipper ship changed life in the US more.
A/Introduction: While both ships “would bring changes to the United States,” the steamship changed life in the United States more than the Clipper Ships.
COUNTER:
Text Evidence: (paraphrase of main ideas)The section on clipper ships focuses on the design of the ships that allowed competition in the tea races and access to the west coast to participate in The Gold Rush. |
Commentary: While both types of ships caused changes, the focus and impact of clipper ships impacted a few businessmen in the tea trade and those “seeking their fortunes” in San Francisco. |
Truism: The rich are few, especially those prospecting for gold. |
Text Evidence: In contrast, the text references about steamships tells us that the impact “drew more people west, extending where the US population lived.” |
Commentary: The steamships opened up trade, causing towns to grow in more places in the US. Many people worked and lived in new places in the United States. |
Truism: Trade leads to population growth and the development of towns. |
Conclusion: The clipper ships impacted fewer folks, but the steamship opened up areas where many people could work and live beyond the Mississippi River.
Truism Braid: 2023 STAAR 3rd Grade Argumentative Response
Q/Prompt: Explain your opinion about why people should or should not be rewarded for recycling.
Answer: Working Thesis: People should be rewarded for recycling.
Text Evidence: People in states that use rewards “tend to recycle more than those in other states.” |
Commentary: The data is clear: when people get rewards, they recycle more. More rewards causes more recycling. |
Truism: Rewards are a positive reason to act. |
Text Evidence: The text explains that people “should recycle because it is the right thing to do. “But the truth is, that does not always happen.” |
Commentary: Sure, people should recycle. But they don’t. A reward like exchanging for food or a lower trash bill could entice people to do the right thing. |
Truism: People don’t always do what is right. |
Conclusion: Rewards for recycling shows promise in increasing participation in recycling because people don’t always do what is right and data shows that cities who use rewards have more folks participating in recycling.
Truism Braid: 2024 7th Grade Argumentative Response (Not available as of July 16, 2024)
Q/Prompt: Should students be involved in deciding how money is spent in schools or communities through participatory budgeting? Why or why not?
Truism Braid: 2023 STAAR Grade 4 Informational Response
Q/Prompt: Explain why the Edwards Aquifer is important in the article.
Answer: Working Thesis: The Edwards Aquifer is important.
Text Evidence: The text explains that the aquifer is a “source of drinking water for over two million people.” |
Commentary: People need safe water to drink. And two million people is a lot of people. |
Truism: Clean water is critical for human consumption. |
Text Evidence: The text also explains that the aquifer “provides water for agriculture.” |
Commentary: The water in the aquifer is also used to water plants and crops. |
Truism: Society and culture thrive on quality sources of water to grow food. |
Conclusion: The Edwards Aquifer is important because it provides water for drinking and for growing food.
Wednesday, June 26, 2024
Proctoring Exams with the Won'ts
Soul Crushing Work Continues
Reading Load
STAAR blueprints tell us that the reading load is
English I: 6000 words for the base passages and 1950 for the field test
English II: same
Retests don't have field test questions as far as I know. And the word count does not include the questions.
Hasbrook and Tindall tell us that oral reading fluency norms by 6th grade ought to be at 204 words per minute to be in the 90th percentile. This was for word accuracy and did not include comprehension.
So...if a kid were reading aloud the 6000 words at 204 words correct per minute, they'd need 29.4117647 minutes to read all the passages. I haven't counted the number of words in the questions in a while, but it's a lot.
MOST of the time needed for the exam is COGNITIVE rereading and reasoning. Even if they could read it all. in 29 minutes, that's not enough time for the questions or the actual work of the exam.
Are we teaching that it takes more than 30 minutes? And why don't they have something to pace the exam like the driver's education courses or the food handler's license? "You haven't viewed the whole module. Please revisit the course material." "You haven't spent enough time on this content for mastery. Please resume the course." "You finished too quickly, please revisit the module." "Your test patterns suggest guessing, please resume the test to avoid invalidating your results."
So why do kids who won't turn in their tests so early? Why will they probably fail again?
Test administrators can't make them take longer. They can't make them use strategies. In one school, kids started the retest at 8:30 and only 2 of those who showed up - even the late ones - were still testing at 10:30. Most of them turned in the exam before an hour was up. And several of those turned in the exam before 30 minutes.
They didn't read the essays. They didn't look for text evidence. They didn't do anything they had been taught. They didn't write much on the ECR/SCR, if anything. No one picked up or asked for a dictionary or paper. And they couldn't do a dad gum thing about it except watch the same train wreck again.
Y'all. This ISN'T an instructional issue. Teachers have zero control over this stuff. And you can argue with me and point to making relationships and positive classroom environments. Teachers ARE doing that. It's not enough. You can talk to me about poverty, and I'll agree with you. But anything else is a mell of a hess.
Soul Crushing Solutions Work Isn't...
Soul crushing work. It's not about the TEKS. Or instruction. Or instructional materials. I don't think there's a damn thing most teachers can do about the kinds of problems I wrote about with Cal and Tanya.
It's Not:
It's not that the learners can't...not anymore. That can't stuff has gone way beyond ability by high school for sure. Once you stop trying, can is no longer possible.
It's not because they haven't been taught or haven't had opportunities. For goodness sake, English has been the same class with the same topics and activities since first grade.
It's not because they haven't had remediation or reteaching. The same class for years? Extra tutorials and groups before, during, and after school? Extra classes instead of electives? Retakes for credit in summer school? Credit recovery? Assessment retakes ad nauseum? Frankly, it's more sane NOT to keep trying or to participate.
For some, it's not decoding or comprehension. I've heard them read. I've listened to insightful dialogue and explanation.
For some, it's not a skills or test prep issue. They know HOW to infer and use the computer. They are familiar with the assessment and question types. They can demonstrate each skill assessed.
For some, it's not that they haven't been taught strategies or that they don't use them. Or even that they do use them and still fail.
It's not the parents and society. They aren't having any more success than the teachers and are probably more frustrated.
But We are Told...
We are told the problems lie in not understanding the standards. We are told to analyze the data and give assessments to monitor progress, but the data and assessments fail to predict or point to the problems. We are told the problems are in our instructional prowess and capacity. We are told that the problem is because we can't make good lesson plans or weren't taught well in college. We are told that we can't make our own decisions about texts and that our choices are the problem. The instructional materials must be the problem. The school leadership and curriculum systems must be the cause. The instructional design must be the cause. It's the kids, right? Because they don't know anything, didn't have SOR, don't know any vocabulary or sophisticated syntax, can't read grade level text? But then all of that stuff would be teacher-school problems because, well, who's supposed to make sure they know stuff?
Frankly, the things that we are told are the problems, aren't the problems.
A Cold Hearted-Scenario
It's Not Necessarily Academic
Soul Crushing Work with Those Who Won't: Tanya
She'd been asleep in class all week while I worked with other students. Today, she slumped over her desk again, head buried in her hoodie sleeves, her manicured and sculpted nails peeking from the cuffs, relaxing on the paper she was supposed to complete for the DO-NOW.
I sat down and explained that I would be her partner today. Bubbly. Open. She raised her head and looked at me. "Let's start with this part; we're suppposed to..."
And she put her head back down.
"I'm here to help. Do you need x, y, or z? What about bananas? Oranges? A new car?" I didn't really say those things, but I went through all the academic ideas and suggestions, some social emotional stuff.
She didn't need anything. Gave me disgust and her annoyance.
I switched from bubbly and open to serious and hard. "Why are you here? Is someone making you? Should we call them and discuss what's going on? Because, at this point, this is a discipline issue and not an academic issue.
"No," she replied. I'm sure you can fill in the tone. "If I do the work, will you just leave me alone?"
"Absolutely!" I rose immediately and left as she angrily typed her essay.
The next day, she came 30 minutes late, spent 20 minutes in the bathroom, and did nothing. Was it an improvement that she was awake?
On the day of the exam, she slept. After 40 minutes, she turned in her exam.
Soul Crushing Work with Those Who Won't: Cal
The teachers told me about him before he ever arrived for STAAR bootcamp. For the entire year, he had disrupted class and refused to do ANY work. Capable. Agreeable and likable. What? Who does that?
But he arrived at summer school on time, smiling, smartly dressed and well-groomed. He flirted with the girl next to him, charming her with his banter, preventing her from completing the introductory tasks.
So I pulled up and sat next to him. He smiled, ignored me, and continued his budding relationship.
Using the paper we were supposed to be referencing for the DO-NOW, I asked the same question aloud to engage the pair in the academic conversation. Again, he looked at me, smiled politely, and continued his unrelated conversation.
I began writing on the paper.
Cal - I know you hate me being here and asking you to engage in the lesson. Apologies.
I nudged his elbow and he read the paper. He looked away after reading. He smirked and returned to talk to the girl, but she had stopped talking and was looking at her paper.
How do we best help you?
Imperceptible shrug.
My heart wants success for you.
He watched as I scribbled. Breathing. Maybe a nod? Eye contact.
I'm really worried about kids like you that just don't care and want to be left alone. What do I do?
No response.
What do I do?
He stared at me. Emotionless.
It's obvious that you can.But you don't.
Nodded.
So...don't hate me. I help write your lessons and assessments.
He smiled and laughed a little.
It's important to me. My goal is: Are kids fools? Or can they read and make decisions to prove they CAN'T be taken advantage of.
No response. But he was reading along as I wrote.
I feel like teaching people to read is my purpose in life...my charge from God. I guess I care about it too much.
He tilted his head to the side. Eye contact. Blank face.
There are lots of people like you. What is the solution?
Pause. Nothing.
We'd be RICH if we could fix that problem. :)
A wry smile.
Can I be honest and cuss?
A Smile. A nod.
This test IS bullshit.
So...when I meet someone like you...I worry. And...I feel like a failure. I don't have a clue about how to help.
Clearly, it's not an intelligence issue or a reading comprehension issue. HOW do we help reach...connect to...help YOU?
The instruction had moved from the DO-NOW to an activity at the chart paper where learners evaluated text evidence.
He spoke.
"I'm gonna go over there."
He actively participated for the rest of the day. Ignored me actively as well.
The following days of summer school, his desk was empty. On the English I retest day, he came for 30 minutes and left. He didn't come for the English II exam.
Monday, June 10, 2024
STAAR ECR Retesting Lesson: Comprehension before Author's Purpose; Naming Moves before Composing
Today - I was working with some students about the process they use to answer ECR questions. We learned some important things. All of these kids made zeros on their essays in April. Most of these kids made a question: What is the situation in Antarctica? And then didn't answer it. Then they said, "The text says..." and copied a bunch of text. That's it.
Previous lessons involved using the online tools and reasoning processes to diffuse the prompt. Then we collected text evidence.
Selecting, Using and Incorporating Text Evidence
But...here's the kicker. Kids don't really know how to USE the text evidence to answer the questions. And, they have a problem putting the ideas into sentences. Here's a few solutions.
Diffusing and Writing from the Prompt
The source: Sirius Online Solutions for English II STAAR Practice
The text: Wild Orchards
The prompt: Explain how the poet uses sensory details to establish the contrast between the orchard and the landscape.
The strategy: Ultimately, we use Gretchen Bernabei's QA12345. We replaced the Q with P for prompt.
Analyzing the prompt: Explain how the poet uses sensory details to establish the contrast between the orchard and the landscape. We use the highlighter tools to make sure we are answering all parts of the prompt. Then we use those ideas to help us craft questions to guide our search for text evidence.
Rewriting the prompt: Delete the question words and start a sentence. Change the verbs if you need to.
The poet uses sensory details to establish the contrast between the orchard and the landscape.
Flashback and Connecting to the Released Exam:
This was the same process we used in the EOC II - Explain what makes the situation in Antarctica unusual. If kids wrote about a situation in Antarctica that wasn't in the text, they scored a zero. If they scored about a situation in Antarctica, but didn't explain how the text expressed how the situation was unusual, they made a zero. What was the situation in Antarctica described in the text? What words expressed those situations? What would we call those situations (inference)? That's the original writing that was expected. If kids just quoted from the text but didn't name the situations these words expressed, they got a zero for unoriginal writing. Too much quoting from the text and no real proof from their own words that they understood what the situations in Antarctica were.
Additionally, writers had to express what evidence from the text proved that these situations were unusual and name these inferences to prove their comprehension.
If they didn't write about the (situation + Antarctica + unusual characteristics) squared with text evidence and multiplied with inferences and connections of their own comprehension and interpretations, then they got zeros.
Kids wrote: The situation in Antarctica is unusual because... OR The situation in Antarctica is unusual.
NOTE - we had to tell them that the topic sentences of their body paragraphs were the ANSWERS to the prompt. They thought rewriting the prompt WAS the answer. NOPE. They still have to have answers to how and why.
Use the prompt for prewriting and rereading questions
For the Wild Orchard and prompt, we also have to divide the prompt into questions that guide our thinking/reasoning and search for usable text evidence. Furthermore, this prompt was an author's craft prompt and not just a comprehension one. Again, it's one prompt, but multiple questions and steps to answering. Here's the questions the kids composed with me today.
- What are sensory details? (And note - don't TELL them what these are. We had to make the kids look this up in their dictionaries.)
- What are the sensory details for the orchard? What are the sensory details for the landscape?
- How do the details show contrast?
- What is the contrast? Why did it matter?
Analyzing the text to Collect Evidence
Students used one color to collect sensory details about the orchard and another to collect details about the landscape.
So, imagine the colored text - blue for the landscape, yellow for the orchard. (One conceptual problem was that the kids didn't realize that the landscape and orchard were occupying the same space - spatial issues here complicated the visualization beyond what the assessment is supposed to measure. But don't let that get in the way right now. We can't really fix that part globally. This variability of spatial reasoning within text visualization as a tool for comprehension is another reason the test doesn't measure what they say it does.)
Kids had something like this on their papers:
P: The poet's use of sensory language in the poem establishes a contrast between the orchard and the surrounding landscape.
He highlighted: "soft, ripe, heavy", "apples green and red stand out" and "broken", "rugged", and "rocks."
C: The poet's use of sensory details in the poem's purpose is for more of a feeling of what the contrast is between the orchard and the surrounding landscape.
She highlighted "laden with fruit", "rugged", and "rocks".
What do we do with the evidence? Name the connection
The kids usually write something like this as stems: The text says... and This means/shows... But that wasn't working. We got things like:
The text says "soft, ripe, heavy" and "broken." This means that the apples are big and the landscape is messed up.
That won't work because the kids are just paraphrasing and not connecting to why the contrast matters.
or
The text says, "the apple trees are laden with fruit." The text says, "it is a broken country."
That wouldn't work because the kids copied text but didn't explain why the author needed to contrast them.
Basically, kids are just copying the text. The stems don't help the kids understand why the ideas are important. We needed an intermediary step. Which text evidence goes with which idea?
But what do we DO with that to find the inference?
First - we decide if the words are positive or negative.
Second - we ask what the contrast is between the two terms
Third - Some kids could find text evidence for one, but had trouble finding what text evidence matched for the other topic. We focused on what is the opposite. We asked them to name what was opposite about the ideas. As you can see in the image above, the kid decided that the orchard was alive but the landscape was dead. Now we had some ideas that were effective and were closer to meaning...
Before you can have author's purpose, you have to understand what they are saying.
Putting it into words with text organization sentence stems:
So now we used our other questions to help us - Why did the author need to show the reader a contrast?
The kids needed contrast language to add to the text says stuff. The text says ______ about (topic one) while _____ about (topic two). This means that topic one is ____ and topic two is _____. This helps the reader (see, visualize, compare, contrast, understand, etc.) the big idea of ___________.
Your sentence stems must hold the organizational structure that matches what the prompt asks you to do.
Samples:
Student Two wrote and then I showed him how he could use the names of contrast as the answers in his conclusion. It's a start at getting something on the paper that will count. Lots of things we can still teach.
More Practice on Naming Moves with Comprehension
So, we crafted the activity below for tomorrow. Students have to match evidence, select evidence, name what the evidence is doing and meaning. Then we are going to show them how to use those ideas in the intro and conclusions.
We started with pretty obvious text and moved to the more sophisticated imagery and symbolism. We also tried to select evidence that could have multiple right answers/names/interpretations.