Her original text: Music feeds my soul.
Her revision:
Music feeds my soul. When I hear "September 16" by Russ, I feel relieved. When I hear "Hypnotized" by NBA Youngboy, I feel empowered. When I hear, "Changes" by Xxxtentacion, I feel sad.
Powerful.
Friday, November 30, 2018
Saphire's Prove It
I've never seen a student compose a Prove It quite like this:
Her original text: Music feeds my soul.
Her revision:
Music feeds my soul. When I hear "September 16" by Russ, I feel relieved. When I hear "Hypnotized" by NBA Youngboy, I feel empowered. When I hear, "Changes" by Xxxtentacion, I feel sad.
Powerful.
Her original text: Music feeds my soul.
Her revision:
Music feeds my soul. When I hear "September 16" by Russ, I feel relieved. When I hear "Hypnotized" by NBA Youngboy, I feel empowered. When I hear, "Changes" by Xxxtentacion, I feel sad.
Powerful.
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