Thursday, October 8, 2020

The Journey of Emma's Personal Narrative

 Emma began writing in her journal based on ideas she wrote in her Quicklist. 

Add picture of journal here. The pink sticky notes are her original Prove-It's. 



She decided to type her essay into google using text to speech. (We are having spatial and vision issues with the keyboard.) 


 

 We realized that she needed to remember the lessons we taught when juxtaposing the genres of essay writing. We created this lesson

Then we decided that she needed to learn how to divide the topics in the body of her essay by topic with this lesson. 

We thought she might not see the subdivisions of topics, so we created this one too. She didn't end up needing it. We also created a paper version in case she decided she wanted to be more hands on. 

This was the mock up that we prepared: 

 

She successfully used Looping and Prove It to add development to anorexic paragraphs. We haven't taken it through the editing process yet, but look at the growth! 



 

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