Kambria Witschi from Higgins ISD created this assignment to use with her students during a Round Table Editing session. Perhaps you could use it as well?
Round
Table Editing
After
each phase, give students class time to make corrections before moving on to
the next step.
Phase 1: Basic Edits
Allow 5 minutes per step. First, students are to READ the essay and
THEN edit.
1.
* by the hook sentence
2.
Underline thesis
3.
Highlight the 3 reasons in body paragraphs
4.
Box the explanations of reasoning
5.
Intro basic editing (spelling, grammar,
punctuation, wording)
6.
1st body paragraph basic editing
7.
2nd body paragraph basic editing
8.
3rd body paragraph basic editing
9.
Conclusion basic editing
Phase 2: Make necessary corrections
Phase 3: Hard Edits –
Allow 10 minutes per step for
students to edit the whole essay. First,
students are to READ the essay and THEN edit.
1.
redundancies/repeated reasoning
2.
gaps in logic: places where more explanation is
needed
3.
Opinions
4.
Irrational/incorrect information
5.
Organization: moving around paragraphs, reworking,
or eliminating parts of text
·
Introduction
·
1st body paragraph
·
2nd body paragraph
·
3rd body paragraph
·
Conclusion
Phase 4: Make necessary corrections
for final draft
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